Open Poetry #42 |
Angelo's Trip To The Kennel |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Angelo has a pet dog. It’s a big, friendly, German Shorthaired Pointer named Hilda. When the family wants to go on vacation, they have to send her to what Sally refers to as, “Doggy Dachau”, or a kennel. The kennel that their veterinarian has recommended is out in the burbs. Felix and Angelo drive up to the kennel in the morning. On the way up, they pass miles, and miles of cars loaded with people headed towards the city for work. “Dad, where are all those people going?” “They’re going to work in the city son.” “But Dad, why don’t they just live in the city? They don’t look real happy being stuck in traffic.” “They don’t want to live in the city son, it’s too near us.” “Oh.” Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-25-2008 06:18 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bobby, I love Angelo's remark, he has a logical mind. But so many people are ready to cope with traffic, just for a good morning and evening take in of fresh air and silence. I think that is the main reason. Impactful! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For explaining the phenomena. Remember however, if they didn't drive their cars to the city, then the air our children here in the city breathe twenty-four hours a day would be a lot cleaner. Most people that live in the city, and work there, take public transportation to work. More suburbanites could ride the train to their work here in Philadelphia. Love Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-25-2008 06:48 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, I agree with you, it's the same problem here in Rome and now people use those enormous cars that look like Panzers and occupy so much space and would be fit for overland cruises not for the city. When public transportation works fine, there is indeed no excuse ... love Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, I like your “Panzer” simile. A lot of it seems to be pretentious show. Of course, a lot of people from the burbs do take the train. That is a very good, and kind thing. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Looks like people are beginning to re-think public transportation lately. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Public transportation is the only sane way to go. That and a little walking. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
It is an evidence that the traffic is not reasonable...Two summers ago I was in Beijing, we had to take the train and therefore go to the central station (a very impressive one) We have 3 miles to accomplish...Because of the traffic it took 60 minutes, we would have have shorter time just walking..This day I saw the absurdity of all the system..We must rethink our conception of access and crossing in very big towns...I hope our children will do it.... Thank you Bobby for your pleasant and interesting poem yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I’m glad you liked the poem. It wasn’t really intended to be a pleasant poem. It was written to show the social absurdity of going through hell everyday just to avoid living near people who other people consider to be “undesirables”. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...having lived in the Los Angeles/Long Beach area I observed the reasons why people lived in the Country but worked in the City...the good paying jobs were in the City but the cost of buying homes in the City was more than most young couple could pay, and so the further they moved from the City the cheaper the homes were...with gas prices so high now I don't know if this trend will contine...of course there is the option of car pooling...having done that I can say it added a few extra hours to my work day...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, That's interesting about LA. Things are different here in Philly. Here, the houses in the city cost much less than the estates out in the burbs. Philly real estate is a real good deal. That's why so many young families with their kids live here. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
as usual...well done! [fine 'social commentary'...a nice skewering of human nature] applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Secondhanddreampoet, For the kind applause. I'm pleased it works for you. Bobby |
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