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if clouds had heart
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if clouds had heart |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
If clouds had heart there would be no rain, (or too much) The world would dry up (or would be flooded) and would beg under the stars [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (06-28-2008 03:23 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful! - Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If clouds had a heart they would know of tough love and if the world then needed to beg it would be a necessary exercise. Just a thought. Helen |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a very interesting 'penning!' |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Rain can be a wonderful thing, yann, and much needed. I guess the farmers in the midwest wish it had a little more "heart" though. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
You are right Ida, may be I should reconsider this poem, may be it clouds had heart it would rain a lot..... thanks for your comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bruce, I gave a little correction...What I tried to say it is that Nature make things good anf if they were listening (cause their heart) to the men we couldn't live anymore... thanks for your comment yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
like 'life' itself and the 'beat' of a human heart...clouds are the stuff of 'fractal' ('fractional dimensional') magnificence [the self-organizational artistry of Nature!] |
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