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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-06-27 03:32 PM



Sometimes –

Moon just low and

Curved in its

Moment,

I feel a reach falling holy in the

Soft light of its offer.

And with hands lifted open to

Receive…I

Wait.

Certain of its coming touch.



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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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1 posted 2008-06-27 03:54 PM


Another gem, Eric, that for me goes deeper than the words alone.

Helen

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-06-28 08:00 AM


And what a perfect landing for moon channeled love ... your hands, your heart and soul!

Wonderful, dear Eric!

I love you.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2008-06-28 08:37 AM


Gorgeous scenery Eric.  
loved this one.
TD

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2008-06-28 06:22 PM


What a gift, an honor to be laying inside your hands...

Indian goddess,moon

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