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Open Poetry #42

Renewal

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-06-21 06:38 PM

             Renewal

After the high storm,
distant evening bells ring,
through the fading remnants
  of a misty rain;
and forest life reappears,
(in fragrant emergence)
to a fresh new world
of calm, clear wonders.

    --- b. e. adams (6/21/08)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-06-21 06:41 PM

Very relaxing and refreshing!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-06-21 07:05 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is a nice little woodsy poem. It works well.

Bobby

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2008-06-21 08:17 PM

Renewal on so many levels....always such a pleasure to read you...

~~**~~
Life isn't about how to survive the storm, but how to dance in the rain

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-06-28 02:24 AM

I love the fresh, clean feeling after a storm has passed. I am saving this one, Bruce.
I haven't been on the site as much lately as school is out and I'm busy entertaining grandkids. I almost missed this one.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-06-28 09:05 AM

After the high storm,
distant evening bells ring,
Indeed I can hear them trough the precision and music of the images and words....
Delightful

yann

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