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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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on this rainy morning --------------------------- A glassful of mist. This morning night is with me, coming to the work. - on an afternoon ------------------------------- Chirping in a mango trove, lazy afternoon is in an exploit to pass time. - clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dearest Ku, I enjoyed your double poetic offering very much. Rainy mornings raise the energy (for me anyway) and I experienced this in your poem too. And the chirping in the trees brings joy and relaxation, I could listen lazily for hours ... I will keep this.  Love and hugs. Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I LOVE your poetry, friend. It reminds me of my favorite Indian Poet and friend, Amitabh Mitra. Short simple words that say everything that needs saying. Splendid. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a misty morning where poetry is written between the dots |
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