Open Poetry #42 |
Making Room |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Making Room Do what you have to do. I have no right to you though I have the sense to know I don't know how to let you go. I do believe I failed you somehow but this is over and done now you do what you have to do and I will be here for you. I'm not sure of any other way I'll keep to myself what I have to say deeper than where the darknesses flow beyond my oceans never to let you go. Only you, you were and are you'll see that I'll go that far to hold you in my eyes and in my heart that cries. I do what I have to do today unable to recognize what I'm unable to say might I be broken like then but soon you will see that I have made the room. Do what you have to do. I'll be here for you because I have the sense to know I don't know how to let you go. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I generally choose to avoid rhyme... but, these are particularly fine lines!: "Do what you have to do. I'll be here for you because I have the sense to know I don't know how to let you go(!)" applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, This has nice, and simple end rhymes. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Heartache makes my heart ache. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Passing Shadows this is a very touching Poem much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You touch a woman's heart too. Love, Alison |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are a true alchemist...turning the lead of hurt into the gold of your words. Eric |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, this was very well written my friend, congrats, much enjoyed. Thank you. Rick |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Touching, well written poem, Dixie. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks all glad you enjoyed this oldie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
an oldie but a goodie pure heart as always |
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