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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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One glance away from tear. One touch away from collapse. I'm sorry, I fear you saw all that. I did what I wanted in that early morning sky. Neither caring nor thinking, dancing, slithering, moaning cry I need to get use to this new life I have chosen to embrace. This new way of being closer yet still far enough away. I missed your call and admit I waited, noting personal just hopefully concentrated on repeat of that dance. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I love your writing. It's both passionate and intelligent and evokes strong feelings in this reader. Beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It looks like a dance bringing alleviation of the pain. Wonderfully expressed, dear Susan! Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's nice. It's not so much about the meaning of life, but what gives life meaning. You know~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you, I realize you are all very kind because this wasn't that great...but it was a purge...sometimes they are just for us.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I don't really know the 'story' of most of the folks who traverse these blue sands along the Cybersea (although I'd like to) and, I usually comment only on the poetry itself; however, I must wonder why such a lovely, talented lady seems so very sad?! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
understanding this...  ~~**~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Lauren? I missed you!Secondhand, The answer is simple I gave up on last forever love. It isn't going to happen for me this life time. but I am not sad in a general sense, I am actually a happy person with sad moments...aren't most of us? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey beauty queen... this is kinda sad for my cancer cusp baby.  Have a happy birthday! pretty please  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful write Susan. Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Ericc. Karen, I freakin' adore you! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that early morning sky was there to embrace you in its infinite wisdom very potent write as always |
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