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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-06-18 05:57 AM


freedom is a box of rocks
with so many windows
and a coffee high arm

but the cleanup too
when freedom is a sidewalk
with so many windows

pretending they are rain
and another is flying
to find another box of rocks

eventually for their new windows


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-06-18 07:45 AM


Yo Dark Stranger,

This is a nice ode to throwing rocks through windows.  It takes me back to middle school days back in the early fifties.  That's before it was fashionable.

Bobby

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-06-18 01:57 PM


Bobbj. Thanks guy, was actually a metafling of how we destroy politically as part of our conquest of civalization.
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3 posted 2008-06-19 03:07 AM


D

This is interesting.  I have a story about rocks and coffee cans, but it isn't political.  And, it isn't that interesting either.

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-06-19 05:46 AM


ms ali-san...this is not interesting unless you  are on the ground floor dodging and picking up glass..thanks babe
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