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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-06-17 08:11 PM


         dreamwalker

Roam beyond the endless
  machinations
in the grasping world of men…
seeking only the moonlit purity
of such a Summer night,
under an immense, cosmic
  star-fire canopy;
Tarry among a thousand trees
of this empty-mountain forest,
(that harbor no judgment
  nor intent)…
and you shall be cloaked
in the warm and gentle
balm of  Nature’s virgin
truths and peace…
mid a resplendent shower
of new and gentle, cascading
  dreams.

     --- b. e. adams (6/17/08)

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-17 09:16 PM


Oh, this is filled with splendid soothing sounds and fine thoughts, Bruce.

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2 posted 2008-06-17 11:05 PM


You write nature so beautifully, Bruce.

A

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3 posted 2008-06-17 11:22 PM


WOW! this is really Geart!!!!!!!
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4 posted 2008-06-20 11:56 AM


This writing carries the aura of a sacred pilgrimage. Beautifully written, Poet, and greatly enjoyed!
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5 posted 2008-06-20 02:42 PM


I'm happy to see this one up here again.
It is truly beautiful!

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6 posted 2008-06-22 04:58 PM


Having spent much time in the forest as a child, I understand and relate to your thoughts here. Your words take me back to that time.
                             Ida

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7 posted 2008-06-23 06:52 PM


quote:
and you shall be cloaked
in the warm and gentle
balm of  Nature’s virgin
truths and peace…
mid a resplendent shower
of new and gentle, cascading
  dreams.



Gorgeous!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-06-23 10:40 PM


A master of words~loved it!
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9 posted 2008-06-27 02:50 PM


I read and re-read this poem.
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10 posted 2008-06-27 03:36 PM


From the cosmic/star-fire canopy, to the solitude of a thousand trees beyond judgment and intent, to the sublime peace that comes with a dreamlike walk in the quietness of oneself at peace with nature! What can I say---astonishing! The distillation of words into the language of poetry at its finest---

Congratulations!

Art


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