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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-06-22 02:51 PM

      Cosmic Epiphany

Mid the settling mists
and stretching shadows
of this twilight evening calm,
slip beyond your dream-
  horizon,
into a perfect world
of crescent midnight-moon
and dancing star field
  splendor,
where you shall become one
with a wondrous, ‘deep-time’
cosmic epiphany.

      --- b. e. adams (6/22/08)

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2008-06-22 02:57 PM

Excellent write!

Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-06-22 11:54 PM

The cause and affect of your poem is truly gorgeous in all it's splendor.

Beautiful writing, dreampoet~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-06-26 08:01 PM

"crescent midnight-moon
and dancing star field
splendor"

"cosmic epiphany"

Where time is irrelevant....

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-06-26 10:04 PM

Cosmic Epiphany

Mid the settling mists
and stretching shadows
of this twilight evening calm,
slip beyond your dream-
  horizon,
into a perfect world
of crescent midnight-moon
and dancing star field
  splendor,
where you shall become one
with a wondrous, ‘deep-time’
cosmic epiphany.

      --- b. e. adams (6/22/08)

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You may call yourself a secondhanddreampoet, but you are one heck of a first-rate poet in my mind.  This is beautiful and I would love to slip beyond my dreams to visit

quote:
crescent midnight-moon
and dancing star field
splendor

You write of a world that many of us skirt the edge of - and you make me want to knock at the door and ask to come in.

Most lovely, Bruce, and needing to go back to the top again.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-06-27 03:10 AM

Dear Bruce, this is moving in its beauty. Your soul remembers and tells your heart.
And I know of this cosmic epiphany ...
Thank you for this!
A silent nod in total understanding.
Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2008-06-27 03:29 PM

As lovely as your poems are about nature I find this one more captivating perhaps because, like Margherita, I understand and perhaps more particularly because you understand. Perhaps "appreciation" starts at ground level and then slips beyond but whatever causes the "slip" can only be to our overall advantage. Just a thought.

Helen

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