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cauchy3
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since 2008-06-10
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0 posted 2008-06-17 02:39 AM



                        Daisy rays will call on you¡K.
Slowly vantages come to backs.
All imperial backs are china pounds.
Also-ran devices are built up frames.
Sterling despots have powers.

Close enclosures heavy close are called.
Bridges are gone to passing troubles.
Drench in breezes with robes denuded.
Much a great as many heroes come to forth.¡¦

Tied composited daisies rays will call on you.
Goddesses all control all as flowers.
All controlled in groups are still have chances.
Sexy daisy rays are catch in jumping.

Shrewdness manage deals are china wheels.
Raw on deals as raze our worlds.
Stiff as heroes draw their strength to last.
Pupil heroes study very well.

Pupil heroes take the risks to kick the clouds.
Ok as daisy rays they get their charms.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3---------

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-06-17 03:18 AM


quote:
Bridges are gone to passing troubles.
Drench in breezes with robes denuded.



You paint quite impressive scenes here.

And I was drawn in by the beautiful title.

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

cauchy3
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since 2008-06-10
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2 posted 2008-06-18 06:28 AM


THanks
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