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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-06-09 07:55 PM


Billie Jean

I remember
still...
you and I
standing on that hill
looking out as far
as our eyes could see.
The wind in the willows
seeming to saranade
you and me,
for you would be going away
and had I known
that I would never
see you again,
I would have said
"Baby, please don't go."
But there are times
when there are things
you do not know.

JamesLee
09June
2008





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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-06-09 09:16 PM


Yo James,

Isn't that the way it is sometimes.  Been there.

Bobby

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
2 posted 2008-06-10 05:45 AM


James, this is very sentimental. Nice write. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
3 posted 2008-06-10 11:01 AM


a romantic aura is about this poem. nicely drawn picture.

clever talks delay friendship!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-06-10 11:59 PM


The last time together with someone we love and cared for
is a beautiful memory maker....and even more poignant
when we don't realize it was out last time.

Nice, James~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2008-06-11 10:00 AM


Always a pleasure reading you...

  have a nice day

    yann

graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
6 posted 2008-06-11 10:03 AM


Oh gosh.. I'm so sad now! But it's true and it happens.  Very nice.
K-K
Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
7 posted 2008-06-11 11:04 AM


If only we had the power to go back, Thanks for sharing!!
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
8 posted 2008-06-12 01:02 AM



A great post James much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2008-06-12 05:22 AM


James... just beautiful.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

patricias closet
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since 2008-06-16
Posts 13

10 posted 2008-06-18 10:01 AM


This is very sweet and real that it comes across from words to heartfelt here.
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