Open Poetry #42 |
Billie Jean |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Billie Jean I remember still... you and I standing on that hill looking out as far as our eyes could see. The wind in the willows seeming to saranade you and me, for you would be going away and had I known that I would never see you again, I would have said "Baby, please don't go." But there are times when there are things you do not know. JamesLee 09June 2008 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, Isn't that the way it is sometimes. Been there. Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
James, this is very sentimental. Nice write. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
a romantic aura is about this poem. nicely drawn picture. clever talks delay friendship! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The last time together with someone we love and cared for is a beautiful memory maker....and even more poignant when we don't realize it was out last time. Nice, James~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Always a pleasure reading you... have a nice day yann |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Oh gosh.. I'm so sad now! But it's true and it happens. Very nice. |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
If only we had the power to go back, Thanks for sharing!! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great post James much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... just beautiful.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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patricias closet Junior Member
since 2008-06-16
Posts 13 |
This is very sweet and real that it comes across from words to heartfelt here. |
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