Laid Out In Black And White

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Open Poetry #42

Laid Out In Black And White

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-06-16 12:36 PM

Laid Out In Black And White

Placing thoughts onto paper
I take my pen and write
Feelings flow from within
As clear as black and white

My mind strolls memory lane
Remembering yesteryear
Thoughts are written down
Fond memories remain clear

View the windows of my soul
Clearly placed in rhyme
It will be honesty you see
If you read this heart of mine

Here as I let my words speak
Many ponderings of me
Laid out in black and write
Are true feelings plain to see

Hope©2008

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-06-16 04:06 PM

Beautiful, both photo and words!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2008-06-17 08:35 AM

Black and white is good, but I also prefer a little gray sprinkled throughout as well. It's the things not said, in between the lines, that usually say the most.

Very nice pen here my dear Hope!
Have a writeous day!

Rich

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-06-17 04:43 PM

Your true feelings are lovely indeed, Hope.
Ida

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2008-06-18 12:41 PM

Hope you are one of my favourite poets

and this one is no exception, enjoyed.

Lindsay

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