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The pale blueness of you... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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The pale blueness of your eyes look with ease into my soul in a way that smiles my inner place and the softness of your gaze holds mine to the quietness of your kiss that stirs the loveliness in me for all to see And I do not mind I do not mind Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
what a beautiful place to be! Hugs! R |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi RDB, this is what brave hearts do. Nice write. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dear poet, your soft voice, i do adore. here the last two lines really give the poetry a completeness clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, This is a very pretty poem, and I like it loads. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very enjoyable Roniece, your poems are so authentic and lovely, have a nice day yann |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
This is excellent, so fluid, I <3 it. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sweet, nice, beautiful, lovely, soft and gentle...can't seem to choose the right words to describe the exquisiteness of this marvelous piece |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice, Roniece. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Roniece, This is so lovely. It's soft and lovely and makes me smile -- all of which remind me of you. Love, Ali |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
What a lovely way to describe love.....thats what I thought upon first reading .....and still do ! lovely Ray |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b..someone is lucky |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know those eyes too you bring them back here lovely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Roniece, I would not mind either! Simply lover-ly!  Love, Lindalou |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone for your wonderful comments to my work, I really do appreciate each one you for reading my words... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
If I could echo all the above sentiments I would. beautifully written. And Roniece please send me an email. Love Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A gem born in your heart, dear Roniece! Very lovely indeed! Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed RDB! ARCTIC WIND |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
paled to such a smile .... beautiful! Ct |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Okay sweet Roniece, this is my favorite of your's, and that's saying alot! Please write more so I can review them, for, I do not mind I do not mind Lovely! Rich |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Romanticism! applause for this 'penning!' |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
again, I offer my sincere thanks for your generous comments on my work.. you have smiled my day love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I didn't know better, I'd think there was a romantic side of you!  Beautiful, miss.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I didn't mind reading this...wonderful...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me either, my friend...not at all. MUCH enjoyed. j. |
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