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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were a honeymoon billboard in that hat and those legs that went all the way to canada and I was the lead air guitar at the stop light auditorium you smiled at my solo presentation and said it seemed knotty too and that I spelled that wrong but you would teach me the other if I would just turn the music down and give you time to adjust yourself to something with a proper mood to make your fingers turn into words _______________ daark |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dark...Enjoyed. Deep thoughts emerge from your writting...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Paul, humble thanks sir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'd smile at your solo too  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ps..thank you for the smile babe |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
made me think of piano music...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, yes thank you babe |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
brilliant write you have a tasty mind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kahlil, thanks for the eyes here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 you play very creatively and I could see you as the winner in a word championship love Margherita   |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Most wonderful - You play beautifully and the volume is perfection. A |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful. what if those fingers turned into strings? Very beautiful and the poem is seeing daylight now. love the read. Tom |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one ____________ friend TomMark, thanks to you sir for the read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Legs that go all the way to Canada. Wouldn't mind some visual on this...James |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Enjoyed this makes me want to turn words to flowers and songs to a gentle caress. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your thoughts Dark Stranger!  Always a joy to read... ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend James, thanks sir __________ dennis, thank you for the read ____________ aw, thanks my friend for the touch |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
solo? stranger darlin' you are best at duets love this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone...thank you ms..nice to see you back. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very nice Mr Daark! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b thank you for reading |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Fingers playin a fine tune to the beauty of your written verses. Lovely writing D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe |
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