Open Poetry #42 |
V Day |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
V Day I wonder if you really know the unseen side of me, the cloak of love that hides behind the spirit that you see. I wonder if you really know I bathe in thoughts each night, with arms in hold, imagining a valentine's delight. Sometimes I wonder to myself if ever there will be another's feel to still this heart into eternity. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
M Everything comes to She who waits,Judging by your posts of late, I'm sure it must seem like you have been waiting in the wings for an eternity & your mettle and resolve has been /is being tested to the limit.......I'm sure it will all come out right in the end & one day you will look back on this etc, etc....Keep your chin up Regards John |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I understand your feelings. I wonder the same thing about myself. But, I am sure there will be another who will steal your heart away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm sure it will happen...I believe in you...I believe that your desires will find a kindred spirit...believe it...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
another beautiful write, M. Thanks for answering my post. I'm glad you're still subbing. You'd be great! The Language Arts/Reading sounds right up your alley. Lucky kids! March is just around the corner... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine imagery!: ‘cloak of love’; ‘thought-bathing’; ‘heart(s) into eternity’; Applause! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful!!! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I love the flow of this I love your precious write I'll send you a special kiss And hug you nice and tight Thanks for sharing! Happy V Day |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
M You show so much vulnerability in this poem - it touches my heart. A |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
Short and strong. |
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