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Forever February
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Forever February |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Forever February All along the edge of night she silent slips with ancient ways with toss of head sends mauve to dark this art work is the sky and more belabor not the trust she has that turn of hand can bring sun down Come February now the time of mourn she stops to ponder not warn or wasted from so much night and day how display the color of the way it feels to leave beloved flying over hills to stay forever along the mist that tears have made She knows this space from every year has come to feel the callus it has wept and contemplate the ways to pull the paint to make a backdrop compliment the grief and some relief the beauty caught define like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair The time is near now she can feel the strain though it remains eclipsed the brightness fades then opens new a page of month of days so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend forever February into love again ------ 1-30-03 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sissie, now we have something to share, in a rare and unique way.... Mother passed in January, but will be celebrated in February. Now I have a common stone to touch with my sister. This is beautiful and wonderful, in your very special heart of love. It fits more than you know, and knows more than your heart. Keep this one aside, for that book you have promised me.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's so good to see your name here tonight I so enjoy your verse |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I am here also... candlelight burning... dale |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Martie.. this is lovely... heart hugs to you my friend... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
We share February memories in many ways."late" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice write, Martie. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful in many ways. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear beautiful Martie, I hold you close within my heart, in these times of remembrance. Your infinitely poignant poem touches me deeply. love and hugs Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, Martie this is lovely! Hugs to you always and especially at this time. Love Helen |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Martie, I always so enjoy reading you, I don't know if I've ever told you that before. Beautiful words from a beautiful heart Sheli |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lovely |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiSis~ Sending January *HUGS* to wrap you into the February of your remember~  Love you sweetie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge/Sis*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Alas mine arrived in the month yours departed. And yet some how the memories mingle partially shared in name and the rest shared in love both gained and lost and gained again. It is your words and faithfulness that I find strength and solice. Peace dear friend. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How peacefull seems your spirit, my friend How lovely are your words and also the response from Larry C Lots of love Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She knows this space from every year has come to feel the callus it has wept and contemplate the ways to pull the paint to make a backdrop compliment the grief and some relief the beauty caught define like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair ~*~ I just came back for a warm hug. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed words from your soul, Martie. (((HUGS))) |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Simply wonderful .......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie, dear Martie, I am wrapping my arms around you. From reading the replies, you surely must realize how much you are loved and are appreciated as a poetess extraordinaire!  With love, Linda  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"She knows this space from every year has come to feel the callus it has wept" Martie there are no words for this hugs |
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