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leoni_v
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since 2008-05-28
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Mpumalanga, South Africa

0 posted 2008-06-14 03:58 AM


If I knew what to write I would write it
A syllable for every day
If I knew what to say I would say it
Before I leave and go my way

If I could find the time I would come back
And see how everything goes
If I was allowed to backtrack
I would halt time in the way it flows

If people could forever keep in touch
I would not have to miss you
If life did not speed so much
I would hang around to see you

(December 2003)


I wrote this one for my colleagues when I quit my job at university in 2003. Looking back now, it's obvious I did not really want to go. And sure enough, I was back 2 months later.

I quit the same job again in 2005. I wrote no poems then, so the time was finally right.  

[This message has been edited by leoni_v (06-14-2008 12:04 PM).]

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leoni_v
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since 2008-05-28
Posts 54
Mpumalanga, South Africa
1 posted 2008-06-14 08:59 AM


By the way, I also used this poem (and others) in my story "Meri Saari Zindagi (All my Life)" which you can find here.


Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-06-14 11:51 AM


Checked out your story, Leoni. Very nice.
                                       Ida

leoni_v
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since 2008-05-28
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Mpumalanga, South Africa
3 posted 2008-06-14 12:04 PM


Wow Ida, you read all 14460 words? I'm overwhelmed! Thanks!
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