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Faces write their freedom
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Faces write their freedom |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Faces write their freedom, some smiles are prisoners, some glances are jailers. Some faces open windows other ones close doors. The beauty always saws the bars of the manipulation, and she escapes in the unknown sometimes it is the tears which write the freedom. Certain faces build you, the others make you wreck do, really faces write their freedom. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (06-11-2008 02:32 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is so true, yann, and very observant of you. I think you have very good intuition about people. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love what you have said here. My favourite lines are: Some faces open windows other ones close doors and sometimes it is the tears which write freedom. I wrote one in a fairly similar vein called Cause and Effect. I will post it now. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, I think you got that right and said it beautifully. You love people, you see beyond the surface. Very lovely. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Yann... you are a wonderful poet mon ami!  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Yann, rightly said and written. “Certain faces build you, the others make you wreck do” I like these lines, so very true. Prasad |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting thoughts...nicely done |
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