Open Poetry #42 |
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What's Your Point? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a nice day for sitting on the porch and enjoying the flowers. The cats sit around my chair. A tiny hummingbird is standing still, in motion, a few inches from my face. The cats and I are calmly watching the bird and thinking, "So, what's your point?" Ida Werrett |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A Rockwell painting in words! It made me smile ~ and also made me wish that I was sitting there on the porch with you! Hummingbirds look like they're going nowhere fast! lol ![]() Linda |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I read this poem to my cats and they both looked smug and said, "Right on!" They said beauty ain't all that great if it plays hard to get. I tried to explain the concept of just enjoying beauty for beautys sake - and they sneered. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You would like my backyard, Linda. We could relax, have a glass of tea and chit chat. I have a feeling we would be great friends with much in common. Alison, I think you would be the perfect lady to join us. I think we would have a lot to talk about. Hugs to both of you. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Ida, I know these humming birds are difficult to catch. I’ve tried it myself. Nice write. Prasad |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful, dear Ida! I hope the cats are too lazy to catch the sweet hummingbird! I would love to come and join the tea party! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
May Tigger, my tabby, and Daisy my Maltese poodle also join you? Love your poem, Ida. Ida and Alison, please give your cats lots of hugs each from Auntie Di, and meeows from Tigger and woofs from Daisy. - Owl |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
PS Ida, Rowdy and Boodha wished me to explain beauty to ya'll. They say it ain't beautiful 'til it's deep fried. Love, A,R & B And we would love to come to your tea party. I have the perfect hat and they have appetites. xoxoxo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have an open door policy at my house and my thooughts about a party is "the more the merrier." I wish you all lived close by. Hugs, Ida |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Lol, this poem makes me wanna chill in my room with a bahama shirt. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Ida, My dog Hilda owns a company named “Hummingbird Protective Services”. Like me, she works cheap. A few dog biscuits will do the trick. Love Bobby |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I, too, want to be there. Nice description! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Life as seen through the eyes of a naturalist with a sense of humor! I really enjoyed reading this, Ida! ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Su casa es mi casa! ~ Love your "open door" policy! Yes! The more the merrier! Gosh, I wish we didn't live thousands of miles apart! Love to you and your lovable little menagerie! My little Angel would love to play with your cats ~ and we could all enjoy watching the hummingbird and smell the flowers. ![]() Warm hug of love and a beaming smile, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thanks, Ladies and you're all invited to a tea party at my house anytime. Yes, Kacy. I truly love nature. That's the reason I enjoy your writing so much. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oh, and Angel, just put on that Bahama shirt and join the party. |
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leoni_v Member
since 2008-05-28
Posts 54Mpumalanga, South Africa |
Such a sweet captured moment! I've been chased around by irate hummingbirds. They're very territorial and apparently humans should stay clear if they know what is good for them ![]() |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Well done, Oblio |
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