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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2008-06-01 09:30 PM

If I could only but feel the sweet breath of
a whispers caress touching my soul
in soft crescendo once again,
along with the soothing brush
of palms pressed and the sudden rush
of two spirits entwined heart to heart.

You, caring and gentle in all ways
never give thought for the beautiful
spirit that resides within;

you bestow rainbows to me each moment
yet, when shadows fall across your delicate path
you smile and love me all the more.
Your touch is a velvet ribbon hushing my core
into the peaceful calm of this embrace
surrounding me in sweet tranquility.

Tender then, is this moment so special
held in gentle swaying.
I get lost in your eyes
when you look at me that way.

Allow me to say those things
without ever saying a word,
listen to my heart whisper
the most beautiful sounds
you've ever heard.

  Please then,
     let the sigh that escapes my lips

        be the whisper that caresses your soul.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-02-2008 05:52 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-02 06:02 AM

Ahh, dear Donna, these are very enticing whispers indeed! A very lovely creative collaboration!

Enjoyed the softness and the soul touch in your words.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2008-06-02 10:18 AM

just beautiful! sensual! passionate!

~ARH

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2008-06-05 08:32 AM

Ladies, Lost and I both thank you, very much. Hugs. ~D

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2008-06-08 09:30 PM

Gawd, I love the romance here, the ebb and flow,
the ever so slow dance and gentle kind of heart tugging loving if you will.

A real beauty of a poem you two!!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2008-06-08 10:23 PM

yea its really right on the groove here

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2008-06-09 01:31 AM

WOW! What a Dance of Romance, this is!!
Just beautiful!! Could read it over
and over again!!
Hugs and God bless,
Ethel
Some of my poetry links--Ethel's Creations My Inspirational Pages
Ethel-StarliteCafe Ethel-MySpace My HisHolySpace

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2008-06-09 05:37 AM

Lori, thank you so much hon. It is so good seeing your shine on these pages. HUGS

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2008-06-09 01:57 PM

Gentle Spirited One and Lost, your collaborative whispered words of love, certainly caressed MY soul!

I adore that Marianne Caroselli painting. She is one of my favourite artists.

Love to you both!
Linda

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2008-06-14 09:04 AM

Linda thank you sweetie we both appreciate your stopping by. Hugs to you.

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