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Evening Bliss
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Evening Bliss |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Evening Bliss Imposter endings dissipate angora haze Seemingly, one thought, one mind ablaze Flicker lidded silence, changing themes Evening bliss prerequisite of peace and dreams Thunder rolls the backbone to delight Stand and stutter, tempos mutter bright Bringing fury with its form in spun silk lace Arch and ardent curl in touch of starlight trace Paint my lash with peace Forget me, to the indifferent chills Solitude re-energizes deeply seeded thrills Find me among lavender and hush painted sky Kiss away the sobbing wonder standing by Keep the promises you make, making no mistake Imposter endings dissipate, blended to the dark Seemingly, as evening bliss, that deems remark Copyright Kkh 6/11/08 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Well, you've done it again. How do you expect me to be able to pick my favorite part when you craft each word so well. Beautifully done! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Always you offer peaks of wondrous creativity. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Bringing fury with its form in spun silk lace Arch and ardent curl in touch of starlight trace Paint my lash with peace Forget me, to the indifferent chills ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Blissful, indeed, as always~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I love images such as: “angora haze”; “starlight trace”; “hush-painted sky”; |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
well written Kiddo...You always find something in your arsenal of words to gel into a very special bit of poetry. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Like the perfect breeze during the glorius sunset, your feelings leave one just enjoying, witout words. Rich |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Uber tongue twisty! Crazy good poem! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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