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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2008-06-09 07:19 PM

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After
A whole night
Of not
So young
Men
And women
Out to prove
How cool
Yet still
Hot dates
They are

It’s good
To be here

Alone
In an after
Noon

Watching time
The cars go by

In the warm
Summer rain


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-06-09 09:41 PM

John,

I got a kick out of this.  Saty away from that crowd, they'll drag you down.

Bobby
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