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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-06-09 07:02 PM

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Oh no
Thunder and storm

Lightning rain
Like a great monsoon

Hey man
No big thing

Been there
Done that


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-06-09 09:43 PM

Yo John,

Me too.  The monsoons in India are something else again.

I really like this poem.

Bobby
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