Open Poetry #42 |
seamstress of ice |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it is as the leaves have penned me stories of your voice on mornings when you come to the window sides and look for shadows of dreams my eyes too are there in dawn skins waiting to know the flavor of your smile to know the smooth of your shoulders when you bathe your wanting in warm my hands are at the hammer stands pounding out metal sounds in oil the wet voices of partial healing when only all of your secrets can heal I am the white hound of winter then panting at the blush of your fires you are the dancer of candles on glass tempting with your perhapsing hesitations the eyes of this thirsting heathen _____________ daark |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me think... never mind.... really enjoyed this |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, I like how you think, thanks babe ___________ friend Artic, thank you for the read |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"the wet voices of partial healing when only all of your secrets can heal" Nice lines, Mr Dark! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite, thank you so much |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful. Love you are the dancer of candles on glass tempting with your perhapsing hesitations Tom |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
TomMark, thanks my friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been dreaming a lot lately, but not as beautifully as this... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, you make dreams, thanks lady friend |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Lovely! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Clang, thank you for your eyes here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You sip at a beautiful source of inspiration, dear D., and in your turn you inspire with your beautiful words. love Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend, you make me smile |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"waiting to know the flavor of your smile" ~ Dark One, I doso enjoy the way you express your desire for a kiss. You be a Tantric lover, to be sure... EA |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Some things are just special Ice cream on a cold day A flower in full bloom Shared secrets with special friends and a poem like this. This is special. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I very much enjoyed your beautiful heart words Mr Daark... the smiles you bring are precious.. thank you Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA, shhhhhhhhhh I am not that tan at the moment..thanks lady ________________ ms az, thank you babe for reading and touching the inside of it. ________________ ms r & b, thank you lady friend, I appreciate your eyes |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"my eyes too are there in dawn skins waiting to know the flavor of your smile" That smile again, and the waiting,.....for the flavor is much too sweet, sweet stranger.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king, thanks for the touch there |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are not only a dream maker, but you bring the sweeetest of dreams a gal could ever dream.. oh..what images Oh YES I do love this one darkdaddy. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms GS...you smile me |
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