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Open Poetry #42

Winter's Eve

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2008-01-25 08:36 PM

       Winter’s Eve

Here…

where a harp-wind plays
its dead-birch bones…
and a chilling moon
wears his most enigmatic
  smile,
the empty mind and heart
fill with purest
  moonlight,
before the Winter night
paints its fine-frost
  secrets!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-25-2008 09:22 PM).]

Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-01-25 08:42 PM

Secondhaanddreampoet,

This describes the winter night well. It's very descriptive and vivid.

It's a little different here in the city. Here, you don't see the moon.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-01-26 12:29 PM

Bruce.. you beautiful words warm my saddened heart ... I hope our dear friend Sir Sy reads them and smiles too... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2008-01-26 12:57 PM

You've captured the essence here. Beautiful!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-01-27 03:23 PM

Nice...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-01-27 03:50 PM

Lovely!!!

ARCTIC WIND

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