Lovin' Those Words (Anapestic Verse - Poetry Workshop)

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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-05-31 03:24 AM

Lovin' Those Words

There are words in my head while I dream;
they are colors which stream on the page.
All these words are then painted it seems;
when the palette and brushes engage.

On my lips, a mere bite, nicely sweet
all the words are now treasures to voice.
Is this love? Will it last? I entreat,
as I know I am offered no choice.

I’m in need now to write with these words.
I will utter Haiku in my car.
While to many it's simply absurd.
Such a secret the words will impart!

---

Alison

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-05-31 04:07 AM

Hello Alison, it's a great hymn to love and with such delicacy,

Thank you

Yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-05-31 04:15 AM

Your words are what these blue pages are all about!
They're well thought and ever so lovely.

You are a fine poetess Alison, truly you are~

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

3 posted 2008-05-31 04:21 AM

you are a true poet with command over emotions.
"utter Haiku in my car.
While to many it's simply absurd.
Such a secret the words will impart"- i like this

clever talks delay friendship!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-05-31 07:35 AM

ms ali-san, enjoyed your offering here
anapestic...from the neckline of your pen?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-05-31 08:27 AM

This is great!!!

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 2008-05-31 08:32 AM

Alison,
Well done classmate.
Doc

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2008-05-31 08:56 AM

I once said words of poetry while driving but now I have a cd player so...

great to read you!!

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2008-05-31 07:35 PM

Alison, you are a star!

It flows like honey over pancakes with no crumb out of place...

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2008-06-01 12:15 PM

To have an nth of your talent...

I have trolled through the archives here
and I put you on my plate each time.

I adore your work.

Heather

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2008-06-01 04:13 AM

Enjoy your talents, Alison. Always a pleasure to read you.
iDA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2008-06-01 06:55 AM

Oh how charming, dear Alison. The genre "anapestic verse" sounds funny, but you really succeeded in giving it a magical touch!

And I am happy to see Master Balladeer happy!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

12 posted 2008-06-01 09:13 AM

ah...the grand-fine power of 'word-paint!'
[and so many marvelous images to render in said]...

excellent 'write!'....

applause for this 'penning!'

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2008-06-01 12:42 PM

Alison, I always enjoy reading the words that you dreamed in your head once you commit them to paper, so to speak! ~ They make for colorful streams down the page!

Much love to you,
Linda xo

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