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you called it friend
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you called it friend |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you called it a friend when your hand was on your shoulder moving your hair aside as if it were someone else and you wanted me to know him you were not alone with my eyes or my imagination either as it bathed in your mystery like shimmering pale seduction when the morning was still water we spoke of calling names then like handles for lovers to use when stirring the embers in secret tender places you wouldn't say you had one but you wrote it in the sand with your playfully poetic toe then erased it with a foot sweep when I pulled my eyes from yours and tried to know you more there was tender in your reflection from that backward glance the over the shoulder observation of a stranger kneeling in sand turning granules back to right again if only for a momentary lifetime ____________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
but you wrote it in the sand with your playfully poetic toe then erased it with a foot sweep when I pulled my eyes from yours and tried to know you more mmmm Mr Daark....I love these lines.. .love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
there was tender in your reflection from that backward glance the over the shoulder observation of a stranger kneeling in sand turning granules back to right again ~*~ What visuals in lovely. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This is my new favorite of yours. I like this side of you best. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thank you lady friend ______________ ms sun, thanks ms for being a special pair of eyes ________________ susieC, thanks babe, glad you enjoyed it |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I keep reading this and loving this. It has such tenderness in it and mystery and longing and ... well, it has all that to me anyway (grins). Thank you, D. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, see, the oatmeal did it, thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another masterpiece filled with emotion, that slipped me by. You are a prolific POET and we are so blessed by your gifts. Love, Margherita |
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