Open Poetry #42 |
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To Fairest Rose |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
O' would it be that you could see Into my heart, into my soul, For deep within the me of me, You bloom fair Rose, in love's extol. At times it seems a life ago, That first we kissed, lips gently pressed, and other times it seems as though, t'was yesterday when first was blessed, with you my Rose, a love divine, forever and forevermore, I pledge to thee, I will be thine, You are fair Rose, my heart's adore. You are my love, you are my life, My valentine, fair Rose, my wife. |
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jessie Junior Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 44AUSTRALIA. |
so very romantic loved it much so beautiful ![]() ![]() jessie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You surely made her heart dance in joy with these romantic words! Very lovely! love Margherita ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely Valentine poem with which to gift your rose of a wife. ![]() ![]() EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this tale ARCTIC WIND |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is very touching. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful. Happy Valentine's Day to you both. A |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly lovely, Tim! Soooo beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine romantic writing...James |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
The rose, a beauty to see, to smell and to feel. The color makes no difference, all are beautiful; what lessons are there to learn . |
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