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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Dancing minds * In surrendering to sleep I entrap the light of your smile behind my eyes. Then I play you on the screen of my dreams. Your hands reach for me, fingers touch neurons flash. Thoughts merge, diamond silhouettes unveil hearts, stunned into breathless silence by blinding radiance. We hear each other’s song, the harmony of our one soul. In rapture we attune to creation, our bare beauty in full sight. With just one pair of wings, we dance through the night along the infinite avenues of our blissful minds. * [This message has been edited by Margherita (02-01-2008 06:39 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita!! you have me lost for words!! A most stunning write indeed my friend!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magnificent! What brilliance unfolds to the page, as your pure thoughts unravel to us. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
This does leave you feeling quite warm inside. Thanx... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Roniece, Kathleen and simon for your generous replies! love ... have a wonderful day! Margherita |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Lovely Lovely Lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, Yes!!! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
margharita, i am back. and,i am realising what i was missing:- the heart warming words of love that you love to write down and name it as poetry . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I absolutely adore the opening lines. Your creative mind works like no other. "In surrendering to sleep I entrap the light of your smile behind my eyes." ~ and I also adore the closing lines. "With just one pair of wings, we dance through the night along the infinite avenues of our blissful minds." ~ and btw, I also adore all the lines in between!  Simply captivating!!! Love your pen and your spirit! AT   |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such beautiful enchanting visions captivated Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! now that is BEAUTY! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, it is a beauty, Margherita. I missed it originally but it was only meant for me to read it today so thank you. Long sigh this side of the ocean! Hugs Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Marghertia ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart dear Poet friends for taking the time to read and comment so kindly. love Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You make me smile. This is beautiful. A |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
absolutely awesome pic as well as the words with it~ have missed your words~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can feel it...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, enjoyed the capture of rapture here |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margherita, this is absolutely beautiful!! Very much enjoyed your words here. Hugs |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
thank you everybody for the loving comments! love Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
how your mind dances Margherita beautiful... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, I don't know how I missed this one Hon. It's truly beautiful. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful poem, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Kate, Bobby and Ida too for stopping by! Dear Kate welcome back!! You have been greatly missed! love Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Wow! English is your third language? Your poem is absolutely beautiful and magical, Margherita. A keeper... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Misc thank you so much! Yes, when I write I must be careful, I always fear that I say strange things (though I have a good ear ...), but I also use a German/English dictionary to verify words when I am not quite sure what they mean. I write better than I speak, but the worst is to understand others speaking English, especially Americans, when they talk fast! love and hugs Margherita |
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