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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-05-30 12:28 PM


My reflection shines through the gates of my heart

departing the lock that has left me dry

crying alone inside my own soul

coal is the equivilent of how I feel.


All I feel like is darkness and pain

This is not a game, this is my real life

strife follows me around wherever I go

so just so you know, I'm pretty much over with.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2008-05-30 12:34 PM


I have felt that way too

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-05-30 12:38 PM


It's not a good feeling, and I think this poetry form was down-right garbage. LOL I tried something new anyway...bah..
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