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Ficticious love...
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Ficticious love... |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america 
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i hate the way you, hate the way i love you like rain falling from my eyes i hate the way you love the way i think about you with her and it brings tears to my eyes dont go leaving my world a mess a fashionable wreck pulling me apart by the seams of my broken heart tie me together with the devil once again read me my rights and leave me in the cold i love the way you hate the way i cant help but smile when i see you close by i hate the way you love the way i feel lonely without you by my side you left me here to fend for my soul taking my heart i'm on my own write me a letter lick it with love i'm under the wheather when i want to be above i hate the way you hate the way i Love you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
poet Ashe..enjoyed this one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You gave this one a great rhythm and the conclusion is perfect ... you love and that is enough ... or maybe not in your eyes  But to love is better than not to love or to indulge in fictitious love ...Good job! Love, Margherita |
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