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song of the corchi
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song of the corchi |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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and when the corchi sways my mind drinks of butterfly wine sipping from the morning river knowing her finger endings as if they were cherokee pleasure she moves her music as velvet shimmering seduction there at the seams of her eden lady skin whispering as she touches another's beginning and the night sky is of her drums my eyes have seen the hare and the silver ring of heaven the bosom of a summer sun trembles from distant storms when the corchi sways her hunger ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-14-2008 05:37 PM).] |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
No I don't dknow what a Corchi is but she is definitly up to something. Your illusive use of language always captivates me. Like:"my eyes have seen the hare and the silver ring of heaven the bosom of a summer sun trembles from distant storms" the silver ring of heaven, bosom of a summer strong, you write like no other. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms shyvl....the hare and butterfly and ring are all symbols that this woman wears...part of her lovley...corchi is a cherokee name/word that fits her..thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
While reading, with each poetically awesome line my smile expands more and more. You are the constant quality gift here and a pleasure to read ... and this mystery of corchi is intriguing. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thank you for looking in and watching... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a beautiful song sung here D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and the night sky is of her drums my eyes have seen the hare and the silver ring of heaven ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Your poetry is a melting pot of words, DS. You're just too hot, doll. But we knew that already! *yank, yank* |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Pleased to meet you. Slam bang gorgeous work. A knockout. ~H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy..humble thanks pretty girl...you smile me. ________________ unbound one...thank you so much for the touch and it was my pleasure to meet you too |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
When she sways, we all see her beauty. Lovely writing, D. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I went to research Corchi, all I got was this poem. However, the sound of it reminds me of the conch shell; a resounding shell, used for many things after the food of it is gone... but with the depth of your poem, bringing the two realms together, it all makes for some deeply beautiful music!  of course, I said all of this before I read the remarks...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...a smile rests on my lips...thank you lady K for the touch. |
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