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La Belle Dame Sans Merci
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La Belle Dame Sans Merci |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In deepest dark You will come Though I do not Welcome your arrival I will scowl As I have before Hoping intimidation Is survival Yet you again Will then look on me With such sad eyes As would defang The fiercest tiger And this old cat Will spend another night Unable not to love you . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, this one likes me.... meow.  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is very good. I like it loads. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
there are differents meanings here, this lady could be terrible too, I imagined during few second the death, but the end changed my point of view.... Interesting as always thanks yann |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.jwwaterhouse.com/view.cfm?recordid=20 . Thanks all for reading John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... I absoloutely love this one from you .... I'm saving it to read it again  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
great writing, John. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love your modernised version which in no way encroaches on Keats' original which I have always loved. - Owl |
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