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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-05-31 03:56 AM



When the women speak
about cloth, about fashion
or about hairstyle,
when they speak about
toilet or about perfumes,
they make laugh the men,
them seem so superficial,
the men they speak about football,
about basketball, about rugby
or sometimes automobile,
sometimes about breasts,
they then make the women laugh
who also know well
that they are superficial
but aren't conscious of....

© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-05-31 04:02 AM


yann,

This is delightful.

Alison

2islander2
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2 posted 2008-05-31 04:18 AM


Thank you dear Alison.

   yann

Ray Sharpe
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3 posted 2008-05-31 06:18 AM


very clever ....and so true! I like your insight.

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-05-31 06:35 AM


Thank you ray for your nice comment.

   yann

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5 posted 2008-05-31 07:02 AM


Men and women are very different for good reasons. That's what makes the world go 'round and people just need to relax and enjoy the differences. I think you have the idea, yann.
                                Ida

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6 posted 2008-05-31 08:36 AM


Hello Ida, thanks for your comment...I learn slowly day by day...

      yann

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7 posted 2008-05-31 09:03 AM


yann

this made me laugh a little

yes men do talk about breasts a lot!

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8 posted 2008-05-31 01:24 PM


Enjoyed your poem, yann.  

Yes, stereotyped men and women talk about different things, but the men and women who are PEOPLE as well as a gender, now THEY meet on a level that the others can't.

- Owl

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