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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2008-05-30 01:31 PM

.


months
years
lives

those
young
summers

. . .so many
rings
in rain
water

drifting back
to sea


.
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2008-05-30 02:21 PM

so obvious your poetry, great work....


    yann
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2008-05-30 08:37 PM

REALLY fine one, John!...

v. serious and long-sustained applause!!
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-05-31 01:46 AM

Another fine poem, John.
                   Ida
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2008-05-31 02:01 PM

A tiny sparkling dewdrop reflecting the great big sun!

- Owl
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