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Open Poetry #42

I Feel Like Rain

kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-05-28 08:56 AM

Rain,
the tears of my heart
calm,
the thrashing waves in my head
taking,
the pain from my limbs
breaking,
the darkness that embraces me
making,
the whole world clean, me clean
shaking,
the anger from my bones
awakening,
the happiness in my soul

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-05-28 09:17 AM

Hi there, Kanashe! Yes, the rain can be so soothing and cleansing ~ and can wash all the pain away!

"Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain" ~ until the sun comes shining again!

Very much enjoyed this poem of hope and rejuvenation.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-05-28 10:28 AM

And then the rain and a distant dream. Enjoyed this view.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

3 posted 2008-05-28 01:12 PM

Enjoyed you here, fellow newbie.
~H

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-05-28 07:26 PM

enjoyed...James

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