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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-05-26 09:26 PM


Towards the North Shore


Early one Hawaiian morning I
went to explore an old mill
that was next to
a pineapple field
that seemed to run for miles
when I was a child
but now that I'm older
has given way to scenic
rows of coffee beans
that provide a lush greenery
while driving on the road
the reaches towards
the North Shore.


JamesLee
24May
2008



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-05-27 03:38 AM


Such beautiful scenery, dear James. I appreciate it and inhale the peace and beauty you convey.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-05-27 09:29 AM


Thank you for the lovely drive "Towards the North Shore".

Hmm, I suddenly feel like having some pineapple and a cup of coffee ~ and then going for a dip in the ocean!

Warm hug to you, Hawaii Man!

Linda

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3 posted 2008-05-28 03:08 AM


James,

What a beautiful glimpse of your home through your eyes.  Wonderful.

Alison

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-05-28 07:21 PM


Thank you Margherita, Earth Angel and Alison for the wonderful responses...James
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