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Open Poetry #42

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TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2008-05-27 04:20 PM

All dressed up
and begging for a compliment
All messed up
and pleading for an end
All cried out
and hoping for a miracle
All washed up
go find another man

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-05-27 04:44 PM

Dear Tina, you are a very smart woman and an inspired poetess!

Love,
Margherita

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

2 posted 2008-05-27 05:25 PM

wow thats a good poem!

~Savana

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-05-28 02:00 PM

If there's one out there for me, you can have mine. Nice writing, Tina.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-05-28 05:00 PM

so many told in few words,

enjoyed this short one

yann

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

5 posted 2008-05-30 12:37 PM

Great imagry...enjoyed.

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

6 posted 2008-05-30 02:25 PM

Thanks all..

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-05-31 03:04 AM

Tina,

very powerful! Well said - I hope that those who need to hear this, listen.

Alison

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2008-05-31 09:04 AM

I like this!

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