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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-05-27 04:20 PM


All dressed up
and begging for a compliment
All messed up
and pleading for an end
All cried out
and hoping for a miracle
All washed up
go find another man

© Copyright 2008 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-27 04:44 PM


Dear Tina, you are a very smart woman and an inspired poetess!

Love,
Margherita

shakalakaboomboom
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2 posted 2008-05-27 05:25 PM


wow thats a good poem!

                       ~Savana

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-05-28 02:00 PM


If there's one out there for me, you can have mine. Nice writing, Tina.
                               Ida

2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-05-28 05:00 PM


so many told in few words,

  enjoyed this short one

   yann

Clang
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5 posted 2008-05-30 12:37 PM


Great imagry...enjoyed.
TinaTrivett
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6 posted 2008-05-30 02:25 PM


Thanks all..
Alison
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7 posted 2008-05-31 03:04 AM


Tina,

very powerful!  Well said - I hope that those who need to hear this, listen.

Alison

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8 posted 2008-05-31 09:04 AM


I like this!
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