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SummaTyme
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0 posted 2008-05-31 02:09 AM



Animosity

When I look in the mirror all I see is Reality
When in reality all I want is to be your Fantasy.
But your fantasy is degrading to my sexual morality
Causing my human moral to be plagued by your obsession.
Your obsession becomes mine, creating deep animosity
This animosity and pain destroys my world.
My world is now threatened by these feelings of animosity
This animosity is now a threat within my obsession.
The obsession cripples my sexual morality.
Once before my sexual morality was threatend by your fantasy.
Your fantasy has now destroyed my reality.
I can no longer see reality when I look in the mirror
because your fantasy conflicted with my morality
creating this obsession stemming from animosity because
you destroyed my world.

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1 posted 2008-05-31 03:49 AM


Sometimes, it is just one big circle, isn't it.  Welcome to PiP.

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Ray Sharpe
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2 posted 2008-05-31 07:02 AM


animosity is such a negative emotion ...I hope writing this splendid piece helps you become more positive.
I love the circular nature of it.

passing shadows
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welcome to PIP!

I love your user name!


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