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Open Poetry #42

I have lost the war.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-05-30 12:49 PM

Horrible expressions of pain haunts my thoughts
while the movements of my hands replicates
the different strokes of torture
that have been inflicted upon me
by the demons of
my memories.

The blood within me begins to dry
then, it's replaced by uranium
which constantly mutates me
into a being of pure
maliciousness.

tears no longer flows within my eyes
for the tears have turned into
an empty expression
of empathy.

My head whirls around in circles
I begin to see everything spin around me.

Sharp pains erupts in my stomache
I don't know what's going on with me
it's getting harder and harder
with every breathe of air I take.

The pains erupts still
and I can't get away
Then I feel something explode
within me.

It takes over my mind
my body
and my soul.

The grim reaper has won
and I have lost.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-05-31 04:04 AM

Sometimes the pain of working through things makes it seem like we can't survive. But, take it from me and others like us - we can and we have. You will too because you are a poet and strong.

You touch me so often with your writing.

A

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-05-31 04:14 AM

I didn't understand the poem at first, thank you for sharing;

yann

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-05-31 09:08 AM

this is a bit sad

but I remember feeling this way

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