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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
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A tear that falls Another to follow No matter the cause Blinded in sorrow Silent release From deep inside Struggle for peace Reasons had cried One more to fall Another to follow Silent by all Feelings of sorrow -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Silent release" indeed. Beautiful and soothing. love Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
even the separation of the lines lends to the poignancy of this write...nicely done |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thank you for reading! |
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