Open Poetry #42 |
A Moment Away |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A MOMENT AWAY 8 October 2006 leaf, brown-curled, lifting softly, seductively, wind-floating, sixties’ tune, velvet-voiced, feather-finger touch on a waiting shoulder, oh, yes, I will dance with you and the life behind things. - Owl |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Perfectly lovely and rich. Much enjoyed. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Tina. Glad you liked it. - Owl |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
So Lovely. I can almost hear music. "Inside a Broken Dream.." |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Very nice, a whisper on my cheek. Romantical. ~H |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Diana, this is very lovely! A blissful moment. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, WolfsMate, Unboundpoetess, Margherita and Marchmadness. It is about a guy way back then in my church whom I thought was interested in me, but wasn't. -Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Nice Idea Owl, you begin the music of words and finally get the dance, very well crafted and subtle... yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, yann, especially for noticing. - Owl |
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