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Open Poetry #42
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Snaggy
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0 posted 2008-05-28 10:47 PM

Thoughts in the brain
Trapped like safes with locks
all that escapes is insane
puts the heart into shock
blows through the nerves
its the only thing that serves
Yet i'm not sure how it starts
but it leads to the heart
ends deep inside
knowing that you lied
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wow, that packs a punch! Welcome to Pip
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2 posted 2008-05-29 07:55 AM

Welcome to Pips. Your poem shows the word "safe" doesn't always stick to its original meaning.
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