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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-05-25 12:16 PM



I can see but I am blind,
What I see is a lot of hallucinations,
All of this corruption of the mind,
Is causing me complications.

My mind is confusing me
making false images in my eyes
because the only thing I see
is a bunch of violence and lies.

My eyes were just shut
and I opened them once more
now all I see is dirty sluts
that prostitute their legs like open doors.

This is not the way life should be
violence, war, and savage deeds
people need the ability to see
before they get cut like weeds.


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-25 03:15 PM


Angel,

I take offense to your "dirty sluts" comment.  People do what they have to do.

Bobby

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35

2 posted 2008-05-25 03:39 PM


i agree with your poem, and most people who choose to do that could have just gotten a job, they dont have to do that.

*****dreamer*****

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