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Open Poetry #42

Super star

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-05-24 04:49 AM

a super star
someone you wish
you could be
because you believe
that smiles
and glam
would be the
perfect thing to
make you happy
and feel free

but there is
more then meets
the eye
that you will
sometime see
how many people
who you wish to be
wish they were
really you without
their problems
and mistakes
that they have made

JJ

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-05-24 04:57 AM

Haha good poem love the title! :P

*-crazycece-*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-24 04:58 AM

lol thank you very much...it kinda just came to me

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-05-24 09:25 AM

As Erma Bombeck wrote "The grass is greener over the septic tank!" ~ and ofttimes that is sooo true.

I enjoyed reading your thoughts. I suppose it's best that we appreciate the skin we're in! ~ warts and all! lol

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-05-25 02:29 PM

haha yes i agree

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

5 posted 2008-05-25 02:45 PM

enjoyed the read

*****dreamer*****

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

6 posted 2008-05-25 03:33 PM

i dont know if my other writeing this worked so it might be on here twice but i enjoyed this nice

*****dreamer*****

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