(my second poem) The Perfect Morning

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Open Poetry #42

(my second poem) The Perfect Morning

Newpoet
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since 2008-05-16

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0 posted 2008-05-17 08:41 AM

The chorus of heavenly angels chirping at such blissful hours,
The gentle breeze, brushing against one’s face,
The leaves dancing freely, in the glimmer of the sun,
At times, they are violent,
At times, they are calm,

The warmth of echoing radiance upon one’s soul,
The reflection of morality in the depths of water,
To be lost in the imagination of the clouds,

To forget the burdens of life,
If only for a moment,
To feel refreshed and start anew.

r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07

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1 posted 2008-05-17 11:19 AM

newpoet...thanks for sharing the moment of a perfect morning. i love the early morning this time of year...especially at first light. good job

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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2 posted 2008-05-24 02:01 AM

The season of renewal is showing its spring outlook in your poem. Most lovely.

Welcome to PiP also.

Alison

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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3 posted 2008-05-25 04:41 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Great post.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-05-25 04:49 PM

"To forget the burdens of life,
If only for a moment,
To feel refreshed and start anew."

~ "The Perfect Morning", indeed!

I too, love "to be lost in the imagination of the clouds".

May all your mornings be as glorious, refreshing, and revitalizing!

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