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The Life I Never Got to Have (Huan Yi Challenge) |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand 
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I wish I'd gone to ballet school I never got the chance It would be nice to swirl about And in my tutu dance. But in my dreams, I'm on the stage A small part in Swan Lake The actress falls, I take the lead. Then 'damn it!' I'm awake |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was absolutely precious! That was tu-tu much! lol Loves 'n smiles, Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
ouaw, what a nice poem, simple words marry themselves in your delicious and lovely descritive poem... Thanks to you yann |
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shakalakaboomboom Junior Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 44V.A, U.S.A |
wow that was breath-taking poem! 0__0 ~Savana |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"It would be nice to swirl about And in my tutu dance." You got that right WooHoo! (lol) Fun poem dear Claira. What a nice picture of you! Rich |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Standing ovation! Hugs Kimberly |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Simple yet sweet hopefully you'll give a repeat Loved it Claira. ~J |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments. They are appreciated I'm glad you enjoyed. Claira |
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