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The Life I Never Got to Have (Huan Yi Challenge)
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The Life I Never Got to Have (Huan Yi Challenge) |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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the life i never got to have grass fields are waiting just inland from the inlet out of reach at the tip of my eyelash wind rustles alder patch leaves woven forts hidden dew berries peer garnet red and remember the first violets of spring as they play the fiddle fern lips to lips sighing a song mulling over the concept of impossiblities --- Alison |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe I'm going to have to go find this veritable challenge, as it seems worthy, indeed! And even before I read it, I am sure, my dear, that you've meet it, with some veracity! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You met the Challenge well Alison!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Well done Alison. Think I will have a go at this challenge. Claira x |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"mulling over the concept of impossiblities" Nothing is impossible but sometimes it takes a time to know that what we really, really, want is not what we need. In that context I guess many things are "impossibilities" and just never meant to be. Go girl! I'm enjoying your writes! Thanks. Helen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That, dear Alison, is downright 'poetical'!!! Every line was a gem! I like the view from behind your lashes! May your future be one of lush, green fields of dreams to be realized.  Love to you, dear A, EA  |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is a delight. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"dew berries peer garnet red and remember the first violets of spring as they play the fiddle fern lips to lips sighing a song" I've just got to take more nature walks! Dear Alison, may all your impossibilities become impossibly possible. Rich |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh what a lovely vision. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Great write, much enjoyed. Hugs Kimberly |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"remember the first violets of spring as they play the fiddle fern" Oh, Alison, that is superb imagery! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sunshine, Thank you for your kindness. This was a most good challenge and I have enjoyed all the responses written. Alison ------------ Thank you, AW friend. A ------------ Thank you, Claira. I have enjoyed your response to the challenge as well. A ------------- Helen, I so agree that nothing is impossible. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the you that you share with us. Alison ------------- Linda, Thank you. I think you are the gem on these boards. You always make me feel so good. I love you, sweetie. A ------------- Tina You are a delight to me. Alison ------------- Thank you, Richy. I am enjoying getting to know you on these boards and through the poems that you share with us. Alison ------------ Nan, Thank you. You know when you are gone, I miss you. Alison ------------ Kimberly, Thank you so much. Alison ------------ Kacy, I love when you drop into my poetry. You see it through my eyes it seems. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely images - both external and internal. Much enjoyed. - Owl |
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