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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2008-05-26 09:46 AM



There's nothing different about the man
as he passes you on the street
a few lines have formed along his brow
and he's slower on his feet

He smiles at children as they play
frowns at tattoes on a young teen
an ordinary man you think?
but you don't know what he as seen

jungle wet
with rain
and sweat

rivers of mud
and
enemy blood

Eyes in pain
no loss
or gain

Arms held back
in
mass attack

He won't tell you what he knows
nor why it haunts his dreams
he keeps it within, this secret past
that hides behind silent screams

Jungle wet
with
rain and sweat

Rivers of mud
and
enemy blood

Eyes in pain
no loss
or gain
Arms held back
in
mass attack

Don't dare to say he never gave
what his country asked him to give
don't tell him that you hate this place
his friends died so you could live

Jungle wet
with
rain and sweat

Rivers of mud
and
enemy blood

Eyes in pain
no loss
or gain

Arms held back
in
mass attack

A flag waves in bright sunlight
By soldier right, he should be proud
But he walks on by, no salute
His patriotism is not allowed

jungle wet with rain and sweat rivers of mud and enemy blood eyes in pain no loss or gain arms held back in mass attack

And when you come to understand
The freedom he fought to keep
Perhaps it will be you my friend
That dreams the dream of soldier's sleep.

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WolfsMate
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1 posted 2008-05-26 10:02 AM


A beautiful tribute to those who have given so much for all of us.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-05-26 10:03 AM


Divine One, that was an outstanding memorial day write! ~ in both content and form!

It is as though you got into the skin of that veteran! Excellent work! ~ exceptionally perceptive and compassionate!

It was great to read you again! It's been awhile! Too long awhile!

Love, Harmony, and Peace,

Linda
Lest we forget.


Marilyn
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3 posted 2008-05-26 11:28 AM


Good to read you again Sharon. This was well done. Thanks for the memorial so we may not ever forget.

Marilyn

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4 posted 2008-05-26 11:40 AM


This is a fitting tribute,  Thank you.  Joyce    
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2008-05-26 12:24 PM


Thanks for reading this..seems like we never stop sending our men off to war.
icebox
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6 posted 2008-05-26 02:11 PM



"There's nothing different about the man"

There is

perhaps

a small private thing

diferent

about

the man.


Poet deVine
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7 posted 2008-05-26 03:19 PM


Yes..Icebox..that was the intent..nothing outward to show that he has 'scars' of the war...
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